Kathy
Deng
Ms.
Oliver
World
Lit H
25
April 2014
“Special”
I gingerly approach the body sprawled
on the bed, each careful step bringing me closer and closer to my target. Finally
close enough to inflict damage, I fill my lungs with air and let loose a roar,
“Get up!”
A muffled groan and an irritated, “Leave
me alone. I’m tired”, are the only indications of life in that barren
wasteland.
She’s tired, she says. Tired from
what? Sleeping too much? Doesn’t she have homework to complete or tests to
study for or chores to do? Oh wait, she doesn’t have to do any of those menial
tasks. She’s “special”.
“Stop making up excuses. You haven’t
done anything.”
“I got up. I went to school. I came
home. I did a lot.”
“Whatever. Mom wants to talk with
you about your grades.”
“Tell her I’m busy,” is the clipped
response I receive from the unmoving lump under the blanket.
I should feel sorry for her, I
really should. I know this discussion won’t be a happy one, and she most
definitely does not want to face Mom. It’s not that she’s afraid of our
mother’s anger, because Mom never really
gets angry. It’s the disappointment and defeated expression she wears that
really gets to her. She doesn’t want to see any of it. I get it. But she
brought this on herself and she better own up to the consequences of her
actions, or her lack of action, sooner or later.
“It’s just a B. No big deal,” I carelessly
tell her. I wince the moment I realize what my mouth just uttered on its own.
For most normal people, a B isn’t a
grade that would warrant an entire family discussion, but because she’s
“special”, her getting anything below an A on anything just doesn’t happen.
Ever.
A sharp voice snaps back, “Shut up.
You wouldn’t understand.”
I grimace. Of course I wouldn’t
understand. I’m not “special” like you. I don’t get everything handed to me on
a silver platter like you do. I’m sorry that I’m barely scraping by in the
classes you breezed through. It’s not my fault for being normal and not
understanding the special struggles only you “special” people seem to have. I
bite my tongue and swallow my snippy remarks. She doesn’t need to hear any of
that right now.
As I stand there, staring at her curled
up under her blankets, I hear a quiet snore escape from the lump. The sheer audacity
of her! Falling asleep in the middle of our conversation! Patience lost, I grab
an edge of the blanket and yank as hard as I can. My honorable sister stumbles
up from her new position on the ground, still bleary-eyed and disheveled from
her nap.
“What was that for?” she drawls as
she rubs her eyes open.
“For being so freaking lazy.”
She blinks at me, face blank, not
even attempting to deny that fact. “Ok. Well, I’m going back to sleep.”
Can she be more frustrating? I’m
almost convinced the secret to her success is the unnatural amount of time she
spends in bed sleeping. I inhale. Be the mature one. Ignore that idiotic
expression she has on her face right now.
I give up. She’s a dolt.
Before she can crawl back into her den, I
yank her arm and turn her to face me again. She still has on that bemused face
she uses whenever she’s trying to act dumb or ignorant. It’s honestly so embarrassing.
Why does she do it?
“Come on, we’re all waiting for you. I
have homework to do, so hurry up.”
That was a lie. I don’t have homework to
do. I did it all, days in advance, as usual. However, based on the lack of
clutter on the dusty desk in the corner of the room, I can safely assume she
hasn’t done her homework. Again. Not that she ever has. She just copies off of her
friends’ at school.
And teachers say that copying off others’
work means that they won’t learn the material properly. Tell that to my sister.
It hasn’t stopped her from getting straight A’s her whole life. Until now that
is.
Her petulant reply cuts through my bitter
thoughts, “I don’t want to.”
Well I don’t want to deal with you
either, but seeing as we’re sisters, I have to. Why did God have to give the
laziest person alive the means to succeed at everything she attempts? Life just
isn’t fair.
“Life just isn’t fair! How come I’m the
one who has to be perfect all the freaking time?”
“Oh my God. No one thinks that way,”
I exasperatedly sigh, but I can’t stop the guilt from bubbling up inside me. I
do think that way. I do think she has to be better than the rest. She has to
be, or else what other impossible ideal can I strive to attain? Who else can so easily achieve academic
excellence while managing to put in zero time and effort? Her role in my life
is to be that one person who teaches me every single day the cold, hard truth:
there’s always someone better than you. She has to be perfect. Because if it
turns out she’s not, why have I spent all this time struggling to prove to her
that through my hard work, I can be “special” too?
Then I remember the B. That one
solitary B in a long list of A’s that stretches all the way back to first
grade. And I want to ask her, “How does it feel to finally have that illusion
of lazy perfection you’ve so meticulously created shattered?” But then I look
at her face. And I see a face that is tired. Tired of maintaining a false image,
tired of the constant pressure and impossible expectations, tired of living a
life that isn’t really her own.
After a moment’s pause, I reply,
“Fine. I’ll tell Mom you’re asleep.”
The grateful grin she flashes me
before she crawls back into bed weighs heavily on my mind as I slowly exit our
shared room. Maybe my “special” sister really isn’t so “special” after all.
Maybe I’m the one who forced her to be that way.
The most important part of the story
In the novel One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich, Alexander Solzhenitsyn develops
his own perspective on the value of work. Through the protagonist, Shukhov,
Solzhenitsyn expresses his view that hard, honest work has its virtues. Shukhov
refuses to take part in the carpet business because he believes that “Easy
money…doesn’t give you that good feeling you get when you really earn it” (34).
Shukhov prefers to do honest work because he understands that there is
something to be gained through hard work. Rather than focusing on the end result,
like the older sister in my story, Shukhov appreciates and learns from the
journey. Another instance where Shukhov takes pride in his work is after building
a wall, he “[runs] back to have a last look” and sees that the “wall [is]
straight as a die. His hands [are] still good for something” (88). Shukhov
risks punishment by staying behind to finish the wall, but because he wants to
experience the sense of accomplishment and satisfaction that comes from a job
well done, he does his job to the end and is rewarded with the reaffirmation of
his usefulness. The older sister, on the other hand, lacks the drive to do her
own work, so she therefore just does the bare minimum of what is expected of
her, just like Fetyukov. Fetyukov skimps out of work and slacks off any time he
can. Another character in the novel that is similar to the older sister is
Caesar. Caesar has been blessed with money and connections, allowing him to
regularly receive packages from home that he can use to make his life at the
camp easier. The older sister has been blessed with intelligence, which allows
her to slack off on her academics without really facing any consequences. The
younger sister works hard, but she feels that she has gained limited success
for her efforts in comparison to her older sister, which is also what the
prisoners sometimes feel when they compare themselves to people like Caesar or
the doctor who was appointed to be a doctor without any credentials. The value
of work is a theme that is expressed throughout the novel, but in my story, the
limits of work can be seen through the two characters.
Hey Kathy! I really enjoyed your story and how you approached your theme. I feel like you didn't exactly state that her work was what helped her excel, instead you used other ways to explain the sister's work ethic. I also like how you had your story basically based on one conversation, and then you would add in background information and the narrator's thoughts.
ReplyDeleteAnother thing that made your story flow well was your word choice. Using vocabulary that had an effect on the character's response to the situation they were put in (Her petulant reply cuts through my bitter thoughts, “I don’t want to.” is a great example!)
All together, I think your story was great since you were able to demonstrate it without just bluntly stating your theme. (-:
This is an awesome story Kathswag. Beautifully written and really descriptive, and it feels really true.
ReplyDeleteKathy!!! Your story is almost as awesome as you are. I really loved the natural and easy flowing dialogue you had, and it really helped make the story seem realistic and believable. I also really loved how you slyly showed the relationship between the two characters. Super awesome job, Kathy! Loved it.
ReplyDeleteVery deep and insightful, Kathy. I love the accompanying image.
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