Garrett
Caddes
Ms.
Oliver
World
Lit Honors 2
25
April 2014
A Midsummer Week’s Work
In the end, it was all worth it.
After a week of hard work, it was time for the big reveal. My dad and I had
spent our July building planter boxes in our side yard for my mom. She had
always wanted a garden to work on as her little side project and finally, we
built it for her.
We brought her around the corner of
the house, blindfolded, singing happy birthday. The blindfold came off and she
looked at the two planter boxes in all their glory, ten feet long, five feet
wide, made out of brand new wood planks that looked perfectly at home in a
garden. Fresh soil was poured in to the brim, with little green bulbs sticking
out above the surface, ready to sprout and experience the blessing of life. The
sun beamed down upon the beautiful, hand-made boxes and I proudly thought, “I
made this.”
It hadn’t been easy by any means. My
dad had to rip me away from my lazy summer of relaxing, playing video games, and
altogether doing nothing productive. I wanted to stay inside; it was nice and
cool whereas outside the blistering midsummer sun sat in the sky, burning everything
its rays touched. Eventually I came out and began digging holes the hardpacked
ground, scooping mere handfuls of dust away with each thrust of the shovel, all
while melting away under the intense heat of the sun. This wasn’t my idea of an
ideal summer, and I complained nearly the entire time about all of the work I
was doing. Finally, many excruciating hours later, the day’s work was complete,
and eight holes had appeared in my side yard.
The next day, we constructed the actual
boxes. This was simpler work, just drilling holes and screwing brackets into
place, but it was almost harder than the digging, thanks to dropping screws,
drilling incorrect holes, having the drill bit slip out of the screw at the
last second, dropping a ten foot plank on your foot, and once again, the
scorching sun. After a few frustrating hours of drilling, sweating, and
swearing, we had just two planter boxes in front of us. We lowered them into
the holes, praying that we measured correctly, and thanks to a stroke of luck, they
fit perfectly. Two days of hard work complete, I was ready to call it quits and
give my mom just the boxes. However, my dad told me, “You can’t just start
something and give up half way through. Quitting is a sign of a weak man,
Billy, and you aren’t a weak person. You need to work hard and finish what you
started to prove that you’re strong. Just remember that hard work always pays
off in the end, always.”
The next few days had gone quickly,
just filling the boxes with dirt, attaching benches to sit on, and planting the
seeds. The omnipresent sun was still there, it was just easier to ignore
because I had motivation to finish the job.
Now, I looked expectantly at my mom,
waiting for her reaction. As she took in the sight of the planter boxes, shock spread
across her face. She slowly walked around, inspecting the boxes, sliding her
hand across the smooth cherry wood, sitting down on the benches that would
become her workplace for years to come.
“So Mom, what do you think?” I
inquired.
“It… It’s wonderful, Billy!” she exclaimed
as she turned towards us, a smile beaming from her face and her eyes brimming
with tears of happiness. “Thank you guys so, so, soooo much! I can plant the
lettuce here, celery over there, parsley there…”
As she lost herself in her planning
my dad and I looked at each other successfully.
His words of wisdom echoed in my head and I asked, “Is this the hard
work paying off?”
“Most definitely,” he replied. “I’m
proud of you. Only a strong person could have assisted me the way you did with
this job. You’ve grown in the past few days, and I hope this makes you realize
the value and virtue of hard work.”
One theme that is
present in my story, as well as in One
Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich, by Alexander Solchenitsyn, is the value
and importance of hard work. Solchenitsyn develops his theme of hard work being
important through the character of Shukhov. Shukhov always works hard no matter
what, and when he is reflecting about his home, he thinks about a cheap carpet
making job, where the workers make counterfeit carpets and sell them for high
prices. It would be an easy way to make money, however, Shukhov believed that
“Easy money doesn’t weigh anything and it doesn’t give you that good feeling
you get when you really earn it” (34). This suggests that only by working hard
on something can you truly be rewarded for it. In my story, the main character,
Billy, learns the value of hard work from his father. Billy initially doesn’t
want to do any work at all, and would rather be inside playing video games,
however his dad says, “Just remember that hard work always pays
off in the end, always.” This teaches Billy an
invaluable lesson about hard work, and afterwards, he works hard to complete
the planter boxes. In the end, he is rewarded by the joy his mother feels from
seeing his gift. Similar to Shukhov needing to work for his money to feel good
about it, Billy realizes he must work hard for affection and compassion from
his mother. In the end, both Shukhov and Billy learn that that one must work
hard and honestly in order to be rewarded.
I love this! Such a sweet picture, and almost like a white picket fence family. My favorite part is the list of drilling holes and having a 10 foot plank fall on your foot. It's humorous and it captures feelings perfectly. I'm gonna go plant something when I get home. :)
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DeleteWow Garrett! That was a doozy! Your ability to bring emotion into the picture almost brought tears to my eyes. I enjoyed the indirect characterization of your Dad as you never gave any specific information just his wise words for me to figure him out. All in all you had an impressive and touching story. I'm jealous of your Mom because she has such a hard working son
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DeleteThanks Keith, your kind words mean the world to me!
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