Football United
I run down the field
tearing through the grass, “Pass! Pass!” He ignores me and continues down the
field. “Pass the ball!” He continues to dribble. I watch as
karma catches up to him, when the opposing defender slides in and catches his
knee with his cleats. His small body collapses onto the ground along with the
respect I once had for his agile self. We needed to regroup and work as a
team in order to win. We can’t afford to keep having individuals take
everyone on by themselves. I look over to Dimitris, our team captain and
team clown, for a sign of hope and power. He calls us over so we can
talk. “Everybody, huddle up, lets go!”
Finally I can speak my
mind, I think, people always try to take a bad situation into their own hands,
we are a team for a reason, to work together. “We can’t keep playing like
this, we came here as a team, and we leave here as a team win or lose. We
have five minutes left, and we need to use every one of them.”
“Alright boys keep that
in your mind, group effort, play balls out. No regrets.”
“Bro, there isn’t enough
time; there is no way we will be able to do this.” said Kam the youngest player
on the team.
“Not with that attitude!
If you don’t want to play, sit your ass on the bench.”
“No, I got this…Lets do
this like men!” Kam stated now having a change of heart.
Alex impatiently fiddles
with his fingers and stares off into space, defeat in his eyes. “Hey!”
Dimitris said directly to Alex, “Snap out of it, head up, the game isn’t close
to over. We still have a few more minutes; a lot can happen in just one
minute.”
The referee blows the
whistle as our player gets stretchered off the field. We run back onto
the field poised to win the ball and score. The second whistle sounds,
signaling the resuming of the game. Dimitris gets the ball, and dribbles
down the field then passes it off to me. I look down the line and hit a
perfect through ball to Alex. He passes it off to a wide open player and
shouts, “Keepers out! Shoot!” The player sends the ball soaring
through the air towards the goal, up and over the keeper’s outstretched arms as
it smashes into the back of the net.
I run over to Alex and
jump into his arms, the rest of the team joins. Excitement ignites my
feet like a forest fire. We quickly end our celebration and hustle over
to the goal and grab the ball attempting to save every last second.
Dimitris speaks out
again, “Alright boys we have to stay smart and stick to our goal, we have one
minute left to score, keep passing and we got this. Play with intensity.”
His powerful voice
travels across the field and sparks the team. The opposition charged
forward at us with the ball only to quickly lose it as I slide in and hit the
ball to Dimitris. He takes it down the field beating two players before
passing it off to the midfield. I can feel the rhythm of our passes as we
move down the field. We cross the ball towards the goal, and the keeper
comes out to get the ball and misses. It drops at Dimitris’ feet and he
guides the ball toward the net, but it rattles off the cross bar and flies out
to the top of the box. Alex is standing there as if he anticipated the
balls movement and rockets the ball towards the goal. The referee blows
the three whistles ending the game. Our faces explode with joy and
we charge into the middle of the field screaming with pride as we hoist the
national cup trophy above our heads.
Tears
stream from our eyes as we jump around in a tight group screaming “Ole, ole!
We are the champions!” from the top of our lungs.
Dimitris
shouts over the commotion and cheering, “You feel this! This is what we
get for working together, just keep our composure and success will come
crawling to us! We have put in hard work to get here! Never forget
this moment my brothers!”
I could really visualize your story. I especially liked the lines, "as karma catches up to him," and, "excitement ignites my feet like a forest fire." Your word choice in general was good and it helped get the feeling of the game across.
ReplyDeleteYou use excellent quotes! They pull the story along nicely, adding dimensions of both descriptions and plot. "Excitement ignites my feet like a forest fire." Is an awesome imagery line, and building your coach's character is also very strong. Also, great job painting the scenes of the actual moments.
ReplyDeleteAmazing story Kenan! I can perfectly visualize everything that is going on throughout the last minutes of the game. The quotes were so good because it was what a Captain would actually say to his team. Perfect ending as well to bring it all together!
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